I like it- very professional. The only thoughts on it are it's still a bit too techy. If it's an advertisement in trying to convince people to look into it- it might work "good enough". On the other hand if the objective is to try and get people to both understand what Bitcoin is and how to get/spend/accept Bitcoin I think it would be worth creating some video demo'ing installing a Bitcoin app on a smart phone, using a Bitcoin vending machine to buy Bitcoin, and then spending it at a local business. Then maybe go into how to get setup with Bitcoin for businesses owners who are interested. Talk about the Bitpay app, minimum documentation required to get started, and installing the Bitpay app.